User talk:Bluem 2001

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Bertha Beckmann Peer Reivew
Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Everything was relevant, I just didn't necessarily understand what she did. (It wasn't very obvious what she accomplished.)

I also feel that everything was relevant, and in my opinion their was not anything that was distracting while I was reading this article.

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No, this article is neutral.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? What did her accomplishments do for other women photographers or women in general? Did she open any doors of opportunity?

Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? The links work, except for the last one. There isn't necessarily a claim, it's just information about her life.

Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? Needs more references and information for me to decide. I'm not sure if the references add to the article. No bias is noted.

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added? Nothing is out of date. More in depth information is missing from this page in general. (Her importance to history.)

Myieshar (talk) 04:26, 2 April 2018 (UTC)