User talk:Bluemoonworks

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Your submission at AfC Milly (fashion brand) was accepted
 Milly (fashion brand), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Libby norman (talk) 13:24, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
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Milly (fashion brand)
Hi Bluemoonworks and thanks for your contribution to Wikipedia. Just to let you know that I made some changes in order to meet Wikipedia guidelines. Briefly these are:
 * Lowercase brand name and losing NY – I couldn't see clear evidence from various sources (eg Bloomberg), that the company should be in uppercase or have NY after it. All uppercase would generally only be suitable for an acronym, such as IKEA. Also, I had to add fashion brand for clarity as there are several other Milly pages on Wikipedia.
 * Removing non neutral language – there was quite a lot of marketing speak in there and this would be liable to be removed or challenged – the page couldn't go through without a tone down of language to make it more neutral and encyclopaedic. Please see WP:NPOV.
 * Adding inline citations. These are recommended for all articles and should be included for all statements that could be challenged – your references weren't strong enough and weren't placed to reference specific statements. Please see WP:V and WP:CITE. Any additional material you add should include references from reliable, external and neutral sources and should try to follow the inline rule.
 * Removing material I felt was potentially copied. When I checked for references, quite a lot of what I was reading on other people's websites seemed too similar to what you had written and this could have caused copyright issues. Please see WP:COPYVIO.

Hope that helps to explain the reason for changes and gives you pointers for future improvements to the article. Thanks again for your contribution. Libby norman (talk) 13:45, 15 March 2014 (UTC)