User talk:Bluerabbit27

Welcome!
Hello, Bluerabbit27, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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A goat for you!
You the GOAT

E-Money 17:55, 14 March 2019 (UTC) 

A goat for you!
You are a goat bro!

OisonWiki 18:01, 14 March 2019 (UTC) 

Kyra Gaunt moved to draftspace

 * Hi! I've moved this to your sandbox at User:Bluerabbit27/sandbox - I'll post a review in a moment. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:10, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

Moved page
Hi! I've done some editing to the page, predominantly for formatting and to add some sourcing I was able to find. I did remove some content from the research section such as the mention of the positive reviews, which wasn't really pertinent to that specific section. I also removed some of the journal articles since they were book reviews - stuff like that tends to not really be included unless the author only has a handful of journal articles. After that I felt that it could definitely be moved live, so I've moved it and added categories and an infobox.

Something that I would absolutely love if you guys could do would be to take a picture of your instructor and upload it to Wikimedia Commons. In many cases Wikipedia is unable to have a photo of an academic because most images of them are released under a restrictive copyright. You're in an excellent situation to get a good photograph of Gaunt and upload it as fair use, which could then be used in the article. If you can't then that's totally fine - it's something I thought I'd ask for just in case.

This looks pretty good and I have to really give you guys props for being willing to have your work more closely scrutinized and edited than if you'd edited on another person. I think that the end result is pretty darn good, if I do say so myself! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:45, 6 May 2019 (UTC)

Copyediting needed
@Bluerabbit27 Let's get this page in better shape. There are misconceptions written about the book. There's a reference to a male perspective that is not consistent with anything I wrote. Let's go back and clean this up. Ask the women in your group to copyedit it and find the sources you used. Your translation is off in places that distort the work.

“Behavior precedes belief - that is, most people must engage in a behavior before they accept that it is beneficial; then they see the results, and then they believe that it is the right thing to do....implementation precedes buy-in; it does not follow it.”

― Douglas B. Reeves, Leading Change in Your School: How to Conquer Myths, Build Commitment, and Get Results

I have some feedback to offer you offline. :-) sheridanford (talk) 22:59, 6 May 2019 (UTC)

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