User talk:Bmareen18/sandbox

Peer Review
I totally agree with you about the fact that the article could use subcategories and have a brief explanation of the different marine ecosystems along with the hyperlinks they are currently assigned with, it will provide readers a better understanding of the different ecosystems and click on the links of ones in which they are interested, preventing them the hassle to open everything and having to find out that they are not interested and close them again. I also feel like in order to engage the readers, especially those without the scientific background like we do, this article should include a section explaining why marine ecosystems are important to humans, and how we benefit from protecting marine ecosystems instead of linking it only to terrestrial environment. This will allow more attention by directly targeting the audience species(humans) and increasing the likelihood of them being interested in the topic. Marine ecosystem is not well understood as there are extremely little studies on the pelagic species and habitats, maybe there could be a section at the end of the article explaining the uncertainties and maybe laying out innovative strategies for future assessments of such ecosystems :)Weiting(Wendy) Li (talk) 20:51, 24 March 2018 (UTC)