User talk:Bmisch96/sandbox

Your wiki page looks good. You didn't include a way to prevent this disorder. In your research section, is that the title of your research article? You should include a summary of that article. There needs to be 2 or 3 research articles in the recent research section. The only thing I would recommend is to maybe make the language a bit easier to read. Like for the cause and treatment part, it would be hard for a person with no science background to understand what your saying. Overall, it is an excellent start.

Bp908 (talk) 20:12, 10 November 2017 (UTC)Bansi P.

Peer review -Ramya
Hi Bryanne! -I liked that you linked other wiki topics already which is great. You also have many sources and already linked them to the article.

Abstract: summary was concise which is good. And you describe key features and explain TCS well. Maybe you can add about how often the disease occurs in people and how it occurs to cover the epidemiology part.

Symptoms: Positives –listed a lot of symptoms, clear differentiation between children and adults Negatives: some numbers are listed (23, 30 % and 70%) that needs citations, the rubric asks for a brief description of the symptoms may be you can add them, also you can make explain what parts of the body are also affected by TCS

Mechanism –mechanism part is missing. I know it is a rough draft but for your final draft include the mechanism

Causes and prevention Positives: stated how disease doesn’t spread, explain about spina bifida So are you saying that spina bifida is primarily responsible for tethered spinal cord? Negatives: maybe you can add some descriptions for each cause (in rubric), and make it clear what the underlying cause is

Diagnosis Positives: states the tests that could help detect TCS, and marks them separate for children and adults Negatives: I was a bit confused about how the diagnosis works. You could elaborate on it to make it more clear. Also you can add which type of doctors to see (like primary or surgeons).

Treatment and prognosis Positives: I like this section. You gave detailed treatments and listed drugs that could be helpful for TCS and included some research findings. Negatives: the only missing part is if there are any lifestyle changes that can help

Recent research There was some research findings. You might want to add a couple of research papers or clinical trials information

-Ramya - — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ramya O (talk • contribs) 23:49, 13 November 2017 (UTC)

Fantastic job so far. Going through the wiki rubic it appears you have done a good job making sure most of the information is there and concise. Only thing really missing is the mechanism but overall it is almost done. If there is any recent articles from the last 2 years it might be useful to add.Glopez03 (talk) 22:35, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Sweiner02 (talk) 05:14, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Missing mechanism section
 * I appreciate that you have added links. There are still more things that could use links.
 * Conus medullaris is used heavily and should definitely be linked, but defining might be needed here.
 * Obviously recent research needs more articles and a summary of the one you have.
 * This is a good start, but you're missing some key pieces. I look forward to seeing where this goes.