User talk:Bms141/sandbox

Evaluation of Brett's Contributions to his article: Brett added a ton of information to his article. He created brand newsections with detailed information such as "Methods of Book Censorship" and "Reasons for Book Censorship". In his section about "Methods of Censorship", he added subheadings about "Book Burning", "School Censorship", "Banning Book", and "Shelf Removal". - I noticed that there was no citations listed under both the "School Censorship" and the "Book Burning" parts, so that should be looked at. -The Reasons for Book Censorship section only has one citation. This information seems factual but does it all come from this one source? The sentence on age appropriateness seems a little bias - you could say "the book is intended for a specific age audience" instead. -The first sentence under "Shelf Removal - School Libraries" seems bias but it is quoted -Otherwise, everything seems factual, you have multiple sources, and everything is written pretty clearly - it is easy to read and understand. Gabriellam19 (talk) 18:45, 15 April 2019 (UTC)Gabriellam19