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Jacobo Grinberg Goals 1. include more about his personal life in the biography, more of a background on who he is and how he became a scientist 2. include more information on his disappearance; there are only a few sentences in this section, yet seems to be what he is known most for 3. Include more information on his work and theories; his page has a long list of bibliography but only gives information on one theory. Even that theory only has a few sentences.

Kanika's Work — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ksrivast (talk • contribs) 20:09, 1 November 2018 (UTC) Brittney's work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Fhd9qyKbscXQ-OLFfTUpnYjkyJvYcUBVje7WGPfzQno/edit?usp=sharing

The biography section of your article has a great flow, the chronological organization works well for this individual. I would potentially think about separating this biography section out into a few different areas of focus, such as education and career and moving the Sintergy Theory into a section grouped together with his career or his contributions. I think most important for the improvement of the article would be elaborating on Jacobo’s career and contributions, as the outline flows really well but it is a little vague on what he worked on specifically. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bthomp34 (talk • contribs) 06:50, 9 November 2018 (UTC)