User talk:Bo0404/sandbox

Edits to the 2-Heptanone article look good. The article itself had a decent start to information but it wasn't thoroughly fleshed out, and the addition of information related to 2-Heptanone's mechanism of action was a good addition --Bcmonigold (talk) 14:05, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

It looks like you have duplicated some information in the physical and sensory properties (that it is a ketone is noted twice). I think it would be a good idea to have a longer sentence or paragraph that groups together all the physical and sensory properties -Drglheard (talk) 14:07, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

Adding more information on food content might be helpful, if there is anything with percentages of 2-Heptanone content in the foods and drinks listed (the beer, white bread, butter, etc.). Expanding more on whether there are risks to overexposure would also be beneficial. The article mentions that 2-Heptanone was a metabolite found in the urine of employees exposed to heptane. Finding out if that had any debilitating effects through article and including it in the wiki page would be helpful. --Bcmonigold (talk) 14:14, 21 February 2019 (UTC)