User talk:Bob Roc

Proposed deletion of Hot Go Park Resort


The article Hot Go Park Resort has been proposed for deletion&#32; because of the following concern:
 * Unsourced, promotional, badly translated. From a little web searching this may well rate an article but this would need to be fully re-written.

While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, content or articles may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on |the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. JamesG5 (talk) 06:54, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Ways to improve Hot Go Park Resort
Hi, I'm JamesG5. Bob Roc, thanks for creating Hot Go Park Resort!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Page reads like a press release, needs cleanup for neutrality. Lead is overly long & detailed, should be a few lines with other info in body. Article has no sources, it needs them. Too much detail, needs editing. Translation is poor, needs cleanup.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. JamesG5 (talk) 03:57, 24 April 2016 (UTC)