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Supposition
Your article about Syed Ali Nawab consisted primarily of supposition and insinuation. ("It is not clear if...", "persons of similar name and rank..."). This is not the stuff of an encyclopedia. If you can't absolutely verify that Nawab had a hand in Pakistan's nuclear program, then we can't include the material. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 15:52, 3 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I have once again removed attempts to link Nawab to AQ Khan's work. While it is true that the two met, and it is true that Khan received materials through officers "deputed" by Nawab (i.e. assigned by Nawab to his specific duties), this does not imply that Nawab was directly involved in Khan's work, and attempts to implicate him in Khan's work will need much better sourcing. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:31, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

I appreciate the advice. I agree with removing insinuations and unsupported assertions. However, I don't think that the last article you removed suggested "that the two had met" and I was exaggerating the connection between them. The article actually said he had "close contact and meetings" with these generals. Also, did you realize that the article is by A.Q. Khan himself? So, I think that makes it a good reason to think Khan worked directly with Nawab, unless you have a source that says otherwise. Are you seeing something in the bigger picture that doesn't fit, that I might be missing? Looking forward to your feedback and assistance. Thanks.
 * I don't have a source that says Khan did not work directly with Nawab. But I also don't have a source that says that Khan did work directly with Nawab. The two-part article by Khan merely mentions Nawab as "a competent officer" with whom he had contact, but says nothing of Nawab actually providing any material assistance in Khan's work. For you to conclude that Nawab assisted Khan in the development of nuclear weapons is an assumption based on the facts presented. I agree that it is a reasonable assumption, but it is still an assumption, and has no place in a Wikipedia article. Such conclusions based on sources that do not explicitly state a fact are called WP:SYNTHESIS, and they are not allowed.  WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 11:23, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

According to the article, "I (Dr. A.Q. Khan) also had close contact and meetings with Gen Haq Nawaz, Gen. Tanvir Naqvi, Gen M. Akram Khan, Gen Akhtar Abdul Rahman, Gen Abdul Qadir Baloch, Gen Sharif Nasir, Gen Ali Kuli Khan, Gen Shamim Alam, Gen Ahmed Jamal, Gen Mustafa Kamal, Gen Arshad Chaudhry, Gen Ali Nawab, Gen Moinuddin Haider, Gen Saeed Qadir, ....".

So, it is recorded on a stand alone basis, (NOT A SYNTHESIS) that Khan had "close contact and meetings" with these officers. As far as I know, one only has close contact and meetings with those one is working with directly. How does one not work with someone directly, but still manage to have close contact and meetings with them? So, you do have a source that says he worked with Khan directly.

Secondly, Khan acknowledges publically in the media that Nawab provided an engineer to KRL who assisted Khan's work. So, we can conclude Nawab assisted Khan's work. It is a stand alone conclusion (NOT A SYNTHESIS).

By the way, can you please take another look at the piece? It no longer argues that Nawab actually worked with Khan. It simply points out that Khan has mentioned Nawab in several opinions released to the media and what he said about Nawab. Thanks.

Details
PeerBaba Thanks for your help with editing. I hope you didn't mind that I took down a lot of your work suggesting Nawab was overseeing the project at KRL. I don't think and others would have let it stand without references.

I also wanted to point out that MIMechE is not a Masters in Mechanical Engineering as you were suggesting. Similarly and more importantly MIElecE is not a Masters in Electrical Engineering. MIMechE is a reference to a "Membership" level at the Institute of Mechanical Engineers in Britain. One had to pass a rigorous standardized exam to reach MIMechE. The appeal of MIMechE was that it gave one instant acceptability and recognition as a qualified engineer in England regardless of where one attended college. In contrast, there was no rigorous standardized exam to be a Member of the Institute of Electrical Engineers (MIElecE) etc. So, one could, theoretically speaking, be a trained Electrician from Pakistan or India, send in his annual dues and be a MIElecE. So, there was a vast difference between MIMechE and MIElecE etc and it had little to do with whether one studied Electrical or Mechanical Engineering.

Also, I found it intriguing how you changed his qualification from first division BSc in Electrical Engineering in 1948 to a BSc in Physics and Chemistry in 1947. It is hard to imagine that the Pakistan Army, Bhutto, Tikka and Ghulam Ishaq Khan etc would have promoted an EME officer to the rank of major general in 1975 and put him in such a technically demanding position as you are suggesting, without at least a first division Bachelor's degree in engineering in addition to an MIMechE. In any case, I have provided references to his BSc and BSc in engineering. Although, it would be interesting to know how many generals from that period actually had the basic / minimal technical qualifications one would expect, i.e. MIMechE and a first division BSc in Electrical or Mechanical Engineering etc.


 * Bob chasm, per your comments above, I don't know exactly what you removed but "without references", no, information on Wikipedia (WP) pages won't stand, particularly if it is 'biographical' information. WP requires WP:verifiability.
 * As for, if you look at their talkpage you will see that I have tried to engage them in discussion numerous times about their editing, and got virtually no response, apart from slow wp:Edit warring, see the edit history at Chagai-I, for examples.
 * If you want to get an editors attention you can use the or similar templates. PeerBaba would not have received any WP:Notifications by just mentioning their username. Regards 220  of  Borg 04:09, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

PeerBaba has vandalized this article. He has removed all the references and material I had provided, then substituted it with fabricated stuff. For example, he claims the subject’s father was a cab driver in India. His father was actually a part of the landed aristocracy in India and a well known Senior Sessions Judge in British India. In fact, the first Prime Minister of Pakistan, Liaqat Ali Khan was also a member of the landed aristocracy of India and had clerked for our subject’s father.

Similarly notice the claim that PeerBaba claims that this two star general who was the Director General and Chairman of the Ordnance Factories Board was also working as a technician who was using lathes and a CNC machine to make weapons!

PeerBaba also claims that the subject is burried in Karachi. This is not true.

Similarly he claims that subject went by the nickname Anis Nawab or Anis Ali Nawab. There was a Brigadier Anis was another officer. However, he was a Brigadier not a General. Bob chasm (talk) 04:24, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

 * Good work on Pakistan and weapons of mass destruction. Faizan (talk) 16:49, 12 July 2015 (UTC)

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Thank you. 220  of  Borg 03:30, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

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Summaries please!
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Bob chasm, you are doing a lot of edits to particular pages and not giving a single edit summary. For example almost 2,500 edits in a row at Syed Ali Nawab, (which you created) with almost zero summaries. I assume good faith, but this raises suspicions. Consider creating a page like this as a wp:DRAFT, that way it can be developed before moving to wp:mainspace. 220  of  Borg 06:18, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

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