User talk:Bobbyybbob/sandbox

Hi Bobbyybbob,

First of all, congrats! I think your paragraphs are very interesting and contain valuable information that would make the protein article much more informative. However, I think you could elaborate a little bit more on sections such as "Whey Protein Products", maybe explaining how this whey protein powder helps the athlete recover quickly and perform better would educate the reader about the effect this product has in sports performance. You should also cite your sources correctly in text so the readers can know which references you used when you were explaining your points.

Good Luck!