User talk:Bobcat2015/sandbox/SuzanneMBianchi

Draft comments
Hi. Looking at Suzanne M. Bianchi I think this draft could be shortened considerably. Articles are a broad summary of a subject's life and works. Many times those articles look like Rebecca Blank, sometimes articles like Harvey Milk will contain close narrative summaries but those are almost always developed by summarizing many sources.

I'd also recommend shortening the list of works a bit. Almost all academic subjects will have bibliographies available online and we can point a reader to those rather than have to maintain them here. That doesn't mean that we don't list works, but usually they should be small relative to the remainder of the content.

That said, when you've trimming the draft down a bit I think it will be a good improvement. Let me know if you need a hand with this. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:49, 22 April 2015 (UTC)