User talk:Bobersky/sandbox

Hi Lauren and Cayla! It looks like you put a lot of time into your article. Here are some comments/suggestions that we had for you: Strengths: -You include a lot of information about personological systems and reading this helped me clearly understand the topic even more than when we learned it in class. -You also do a good job of including pictures and tables that can help to keep the article interesting and organize/provide examples of specific parts of your article. -You included how personological systems can be found in other areas of research, which was a very helpful and interesting tie-in and maybe this is a place you could include a link.

Areas of Improvement: -Make sure that you have at least 4 research studies and 6 secondary sources in your article. It would be interesting if you talked about different studies that led to certain findings regarding personological systems. -Your article could also be improved by adding links to your article. This would be helpful for readers because they would be able to easily access extra information that was related to your own topic or that may help them better understand your topic - Maybe try to work on the Wikipedia formatting so that flows better from one section to the next one and also maybe try to use the reference tools on Wikipedia so that you don’t have to keep your references in the middle of the article and they can be in a neat, organized list at the bottom of your article!

Allifeig (talk) 15:49, 19 November 2012 (UTC) Caseyduran7 (talk) 16:04, 19 November 2012 (UTC)Caseyduran7