User talk:Bogbt

Hello, Welcome to Wikipedia. Your Mobile_membranes article is certainly comprehensive. There are a few elements that will greatly improve it for the encyclopedia: Good luck. Feel free to ask any questions and I'll try to help. T.Shafee(Evo &#38; Evo)talk 13:02, 17 September 2018 (UTC) L
 * The first sentence should be a concise and self-contained definition of a mobile membrane in this context.
 * The first paragraph should be understandable by a late high-school student or first-year undergraduate. Later sections can be more technical.
 * You may need to change the reference formatting (others may help you with this). See a tutorial here.
 * Try to make as many sections as possible understandable in isolation.
 * Consider the addition of conceptual diagrams to better-illustrate some of the complex concepts.
 * Consider also checking whether Membrane computing article can be improved.
 * An additional note: What proportion of the article is original research, versus a summary of published research? T.Shafee(Evo &#38; Evo)talk 23:26, 17 September 2018 (UTC)