User talk:Bolibenj/Manicure

Etymology Section
This section contains good information, but the facts stated are not common knowledge and would need a citation--Gh006944 (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the suggestion. I agree that this section needs more evidence to back it up.Bolibenj (talk) 17:14, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

How to Improve
I think you could put a source in your Etymology paragraph to give credibility to your work. Marsmorg (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

I think that where you talk about nail polish lasting 2-3 days you should include something about gel polish which can last up to 2-3 weeks. -Breighlee.t (talk) 17:19, 28 October 2022 (UTC)Breighlee.t

Constructive Ideas
In your article, it states that there is licensing and regulations that the technicians have to abide by. This might be an opportunity to expand on these ideas (i.e. how long it takes to obtain this). Good Luck! Emmarice11.11 (talk) 17:13, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

Addition to Article
It might be of use to add more about the licensing requirements for professional salons because it mentioned government regulations and licensing but not much about it. CLouDowns (talk) 17:17, 28 October 2022 (UTC)