User talk:Boligrafo3/sandbox

-Try to Provide a little more detail in early life if possible, maybe discussing how she became interested in science -In Career and Research discuss what she teaches at Berkley and for how long. What does the lab she runs try to accomplish? Mention specific projects she has been involved with when talking about what she is known for. -Her awards do a good job of proving notability, but try to make the section flow a little better instead of just almost listing her accomplishments -Talk more about her publications a little more, has she been cited a lot? Mention a few more of her articles specifically as well -Specify how she helps ranchers sequester carbon, what is her strategy? - References appear to look goo and you definitely have enough sources which is good. -In general try to expand on what you are saying a little more and get slightly more specific, besides that it is looking very good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Johnmsommers (talk • contribs) 19:20, 8 November 2018 (UTC)