User talk:Bondarenkovero/sandbox

This article is very thorough and well-organized! I think you've done a great job of breaking down this organization and what they are about! You definitely sound knowledgeable about the topic without being biased.

Grammatically, your work is super strong, but you might want to double check some spots. For example, in your first paragraph, you said "Their first nation conference..." and I wondered if you meant "national" or "nationwide"? Also, you may want to see if you can clear up the language you use in your second paragraph to give it some variety, specifically when you're talking about the friction and change in the organization.

If you're looking for ways to beef up your article, you might be able to add a section describing backlash to the movement if you can find any research on that, or maybe you could talk a little more in-depth about what the organization has been up to recently! I think that might make your work a little more relevant for people who read it today.

Overall, great work! -Caroline