User talk:BonfantiEloïse

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Hello, I revised your translation and you can see my changes at this link. Tenses (particularly the use of the present perfect tense) and the order of events in the past seem to be thigns that tripped you up a little, but otherwise it was pretty good. I also took the liberty of copying the references from the source text. If you're happy with it, I think the article is good to go now. MHAN2016 (talk) 14:12, 6 May 2020 (UTC)