User talk:BonfireAtNight

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Children of Memory (July 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

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KylieTastic (talk) 09:15, 15 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Hey Kylie,
 * thanks for your quick response! I would like to improve the draft, but I'm a bit confused as to how to best proceed.
 * The article is about a novel, so naturally the book itself is the primary source. For the plot I refer to the parts that are summarizes in the respective subsections. As for the topics in the Major Themes section, characters in the book itself mention and discuss them explicitly. What makes "most of the content unsourced"? Would I best refer to the pages or cite the passages in the primary source?
 * As far as I can tell, the article for the previous novel in the series, Children of Ruin, has references only for the Reception of the book. How does the article attest the other information it provides on the book and how could I do the same for Children of Memory?
 * Kind regards,
 * Kai BonfireAtNight (talk) 09:40, 15 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi BonfireAtNight, the key thing to note is that all new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). In this case also see Notability (books). Like Children of Ruin it should really have some form of reception section with ideally at least three non-trivail reviews from independent reliable sources. You already have 1 so look to see if you can find more like:, and not quiet as good but still usable . Regards KylieTastic (talk) 12:52, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Hello KylieTastic,
 * thanks for taking the time to clear things up (and to even provide some sources)!
 * I consulted articles in an earlier attempt to write a Reception section similar to the one in the Children of Ruin article. What made me stumble was the fact that in the (surprisingly few) articles I could find there was usually no obvious evaluation of the quality of the work. But referring to sources that point to the topical richness of the book (and explicitly mentioning those topics) would probably already improve my original article somehow.
 * I'll read the links you've included and then write another version of the draft tomorrow. I hope this will reflect your feedback.
 * Thanks again,
 * Kai BonfireAtNight (talk) 16:43, 15 July 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Children of Memory (novel) (July 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Asilvering was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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asilvering (talk) 04:24, 22 July 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Children of Memory (novel) (October 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Ca were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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Ca talk to me! 11:53, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:06, 19 April 2024 (UTC)