User talk:Botticellixniece

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Your submission at Articles for creation
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Hi Again, Sorry to be slow. I removed the lists as you recommended, and made some additional revisions. I also reviewed the citations, and believe they are all valid, with links to real news articles (not recycled press releases, chambers of commerce, etc. I hope it is acceptable now. If you have any additional feedback or suggestions, please let me know. Thanks you again! Botticellixniece (talk) 19:18, 22 May 2010 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
Your nomination at Articles for Creation was declined, and Wikipedia& was not created. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer, and please feel free to request article creation again once the issues have been addressed. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ~ Amory ( u •  t  •  c ) 17:22, 10 May 2010 (UTC)