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Bourbonnaisd (talk) 00:59, 18 April 2018 (UTC)Daniella Bourbonnais

Katie's peer review
Why do you plan on changing the title to "Threading Needle"? Isn't the film called "Grandma Threading her Needle"? I would keep the original sentence of "Grandma Threading her Needle is a 1900 British short silent comedy film, directed by George Albert Smith, featuring a grandma trying to get a thread though a needle." In that sentence, I noticed that "though" is supposed to be "through" so be sure to fix that mistake as part of your editing. Since you plan on talking about George Albert Smith, you should make a separate section for him on the page. Give a brief overview of his background (life) and work (i.e did he produce any other films?) since there is already a Wikipedia page dedicated to him. Since you also plan on talking about what a short film is, you should also make it a separate section discussing it in 1 or 2 sentences describing what it is. (i.e Who was the first to make a silent film? What did they do? Why did they do it?)

Some questions to consider: What equipment was used to make this film? Is there any statistics that you can add to the article for this film? (i.e Was it popular? How much money did it make?) Is there a reason why it's only 56 seconds long? Does the grandma show multiple facial expressions throughout the film? Who would best enjoy this film? Is it entertaining?

Indigo24 (talk) 15:45, 25 April 2018 (UTC)