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Ross Granville Harrison Peer Review

1. I liked that the student provided a section that acknowledged the scientist's other interests. 2. Information about the personal life of the scientist was provided. 3. The tone was neutral. 4. The student could provide more information when he stated: "studied in many places around the world." 5. The introduction is a little vague because of the wording in places such as: "studied in many places around the world" and "many learned societies and received several awards".