User talk:Bps55/sandbox

Hennepin County is also home to several major private companies such as Carlson and Cargill, both located in Minnetonka, the latter of which is the largest privately-owned company in the United States.

I think this sentence should just mention the the company Cargill because it is has a specific reason to be mentioned instead of just naming examples. Or maybe include all of the major private companies? Katem0315 (talk) 17:00, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

"As of the 2018 estimate, there are twelve Fortune 500 companies headquartered in Hennepin County, five of which are located in Minneapolis."

You can probably just say "As of 2018" to make your writing more concise and straightforward. Additionally, you can add internal links for things such as "Fortune 500" and "Minneapolis" and make sure you cite where you got this information from. --Anjinimathur (talk) 17:03, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

2016 American Community Survey. Can this be hyperlinked or sourced? Jevilla001 (talk) 17:13, 28 November 2018 (UTC)