User talk:Bradshippir

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! &mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 17:58, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/False Alarm Reduction Association
Dear Bradshippir: I have added an extra source to your article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/False Alarm Reduction Association, removed some text copied from a web site, and added detail to the references. You might try submitting it again now and see if it will be accepted. If not, it seems to be reasonably easy to find news reports about this arganization, and you can add more. &mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 00:22, 6 August 2013 (UTC)