User talk:Braeden Ewuk/Widgeon Valley National Wildlife Area

Edits and suggestions
Hey Braedon, Sorry for the late peer review, I had read and reviewed your article but I had not published my suggested edits correctly. Your article looks awesome, the formatting is very easy to follow and the article reads very well. The first thing that stood out to me in the article was in the lead. It reads well, although when you address the threats to wetlands, it seems to be in a general sense, would elaborating on these threats in a way that is specific to the widgeon valley wetland be an improvement? I also notice in the fauna section, you list the latin name of the western screech owl, but not the other listed species, is this to make a distinction between the western screech owl and another similar species? if it isn't, it may be helpful to include all the latin names for continuity.

Other than these minor edits your article looks beautiful, well done! Reiid.connor (talk) 20:39, 25 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Formatting, grammar and citations are very strong in this article.
 * The article was easy to follow and organized information effectively. I was able to identify the themes of each paragraph in the article and explore further with the listed sources.
 * Each of the five topics were present, and clearly represented.
 * there were very few gaps in the article, it flows well and includes information about the surrounding area and characteristics of the region that make the park special.
 * The tone is very professional and concise. The article sites relevant and trustworthy sources, although sources regarding indigenous activity in the park are from the government of Canada, which may not represent the indigenous perspective effectively, a source from an indigenous group may be helpful to ensure all perspectives are represented. Reiid.connor (talk) 21:26, 25 October 2022 (UTC)