User talk:Braelynn2000

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Hello, Braelynn2000, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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WCI Peer Review
It was easy to understand the topic of Epistrocacy, however, when you were explaining your three main tenets, I would suggest changing the structure (to a bulletin board for example) so that the reader doesn't get lost with where he is reading or mix up the words with each other. I also would suggest you do the same for the six possible forms of epistocracy. Alihawatmeh (talk) 14:17, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate how thorough you were with your review of what little I had written. I think your suggestion to refer to Springer is a good one, and it would substantiate my claim that utilitarianism is popular and persuasive. I definitely will add more content to this section. I may also edit another section of the article and keep in mind all of your comments as I do so. Thanks!HarryJL (talk) 17:46, 10 October 2021 (UTC)HarryJL