User talk:Branchkaleb/sandbox

Peer review: I really like the edit that you made to that first paragraph- as I was reading the original page it seemed clunky and repetitive, and your addition was much clearer. I think that the section "Communication lines: physical layer" could be improved similarly, maybe with some sort of visual or discussion as to what is physically happening? The section on repeaters was confusing to me as well- maybe y'all could break down that process a little more? Overall, cleaning up the tone of the page like you did with that first paragraph would probably be helpful. Gwen Leifer (talk) 00:04, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer review #2: I agree with the comments Gwen gives above. The official page as of now has a lot of information, so adding new sources or information may be difficult. If anything, I think the "Applications" section could be expanded a bit. Other than that, keep up the simplification as it makes the reading much clearer. --Ghartfie (talk) 01:37, 13 November 2018 (UTC)