User talk:BrandonM46/sandbox

some draft comments
Just dropping by with some comments on the draft: Thanks! Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:40, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Sourcing is pretty tough to find (beyond blogs and what you have on the page already). I'd say that a good way to deal with that is to trim the stuff which can only be sourced to marginal sources and see if the article reads better or is more neutral.
 * I wouldn't place too much emphasis on upcoming projects (especially if they haven't seen a lot of third party coverage), it's always tough to talk about future projects (as they are often delayed/cancelled/changed) and sometimes doing so can cause other editors to see the text as promotional (not an unlikely outcome for an up and coming comedian.