User talk:Brany Barragan/sandbox

Hello Peer reviewer!

SO this is what I have so far. I mostly struggled with citing things as I feel like everything needs to be cited so if you have any suggestions let me know. In addition help on the structure of sentences and paragraphs would be appreciated!

Kate's Peer Review
Looks great - I honestly think all the citations are needed, so don't worry I did the same thing! However, it looks like you made a new citation for the same source several times, and theres a way to re-use citations so it's a little less cluttered at the bottom in the references section. I believe there is a training on this if you're confused! :)

Regarding material - some of the sentence phrasing in the introduction reads a little confusing, I recommend reading it out loud and seeing where you can move things around. I see you have a section titled response, so I think it would be good to discuss what some of the efforts against deforestation have been, especially indigenous led ones that may on get very much media attention! I would also love to hear more about the impacts of deforestation - how does it contribute to carbon emissions? Climate change? Disrupting the resiliency of an ecosystem? I think it would also be interesting to discuss deforestation occurring today - what companies are mostly responsible and where is the wood going?

Overall, looks really great! Katemalone99 (talk) 01:34, 6 April 2020 (UTC)