User talk:Brbrewer94/sandbox

I would separate thought by creating two paragraphs instead of a large block. I would separate it around here "It really wasn't until Per Seyersted, a Norwegian professor and scholar, rediscovered her almost 70 years later that the general public began to really appreciate her work as essential Feminist and Southern literature from the 19th Century." where it talks about her rediscovery.Rme22031 (talk) 18:36, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

I think there is a little too much information but but your could separate them into many paragraphs instead of having one. The grammar is not bad though there are a lot of works and edits. Citations are great though.Majid367 (talk) 19:03, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Umar Rana

Add some of the story or name the story that was published with the magazine — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nom202 (talk • contribs) 19:21, 29 November 2018 (UTC)