User talk:Brbs4303/Seawater/Sarahbrown5 Peer Review

Response to Peer Review
Hi Sarah, thank you for the detailed feedback. I appreciate you acknowledging the neutrality and balance I have written throughout the article as well as the acknowledgment of up to date information. I agree with your comments about the use of "some suggest" without a specified source, as it can seem like it is coming from a biased point of view. I will revise that section to ensure all claims that are being made are properly supported by reference as "some suggest" lacks clarity, neutrality, as well as proper citing. In regards to the organization of my article, the feedback is noted. I will ensure that the integration of my section will flow with the existing structure of the article. Thank you once again for the valuable feedback. I will keep in mind the suggestions you have made to further improve this article and address the tone and balance of the article as well as make sure my additions flow with the article's current structure and lastly revise the sources to make sure there aren't two of the same. Best of luck the rest of this term, Sarah! Brbs4303 (talk) 02:43, 9 March 2024 (UTC)