User talk:Breakfast4dinner/Children's clothing

Peer review (Knechti1)
- Article is very well worded and isn't too opinionated for a very touchy topic. Factual information is presented well. -The only thing I could think of adding is to elaborate on why the colors green and blue are considered masculine and how they are presented as masculine colors. - expanded information from other parts of the world would help elaborate how other cultures react to how colors represent genders but if no concrete information can be found then the limited information gather from the US and UK should be fine. - elaborating on what societal penalties boys receive for acting in feminine ways might help readers understand the scope and impact that the pressure from society to be masculine on boys effects them. Knechti1 (talk) 17:33, 22 October 2021 (UTC)