User talk:BreannaNg/sandbox

Great start on adding questions and beginning to answer them! Consider answering the other questions, as well as looking for sources to cite the material that is missing citations, especially inputting scholarly sources as the page is lacking those in particular. Consider outlining what specific points you are thinking of mentioning in the article with regards to online shopping. JulessnowJulessnow (talk) 14:15, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

Hey Breanna! I enjoyed your article and found it easy to understand. I would suggest adding subheadings, like definition, to help with navigating your article. Great Job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Louange Mwajuma (talk • contribs) 02:50, 8 April 2019 (UTC) Louange Mwajuma (talk) 02:58, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

Hey! Great job on writing your post! I feel that you added the necessary content to the article that helps me gain a greater understanding of online shopping. I would love for you to add more to your paragraph! If I could suggest something, adding subheadings will help the casual wiki user to better understand what they are reading. Lamontoscar (talk) 02:56, 8 April 2019 (UTC)