User talk:BreeanaKoemans/sandbox

Hi there, these are good sources to use for sure. Have you given any thought to how you will arrange your contributions (e.g. specific headings or subheadings you might use)? Amyc29 (talk) 14:01, 24 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi Amy, I have now updated the formatting and everything for my article. I think you already checked it out but wanted to update the stage I was at on here for reference later. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by BreeanaKoemans (talk • contribs) 15:18, 28 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi Breeana,

It looks really good and I can tell there was a lot of work put into it. A couple things I see for improvement: - There are some errors in sentence structure - missing words, etc. If you want me to fix them maybe send me a Word version so I can comment on it, but I think if you read through it you'd be able to catch them! - Out of curiosity, why is it labeled FCB and not FCP? It wasn't intuitive for me and whenever I came across "FCB" I'd have to think about it for a bit. - Sources are good, I think you have plenty of them - Could you give any statistics? Such as effectiveness or approval ratings? - Also, could you add more concrete examples on specific exercises the practices use? Overall, lots of information on it I just think it could be a bit more thorough and proofread a bit. Hopefully this helps! Jenjhayashi (talk) 21:38, 31 July 2016 (UTC)