User talk:Brendacastrejon/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: The beginning of this section reads like an obituary rather than a professional article. Sentences like “He died during a peaceful sleep” and “Although he is no longer alive, his legacy still lives on” should be revised to reflect a more biographical tone.

Paraphrasing real science: yes

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: none

Score: 17/20

Peer Review:

CHATTERJEE, KUSHAL Peer Review: 0/20