User talk:Brendacelio

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Hello, Brendacelio, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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peer review from Wen Liu
Great job with the editing so far! There is a lot of details in your article and you did a good job breaking them down into sections, which made it very easy to read. For your next daft, I don’t think there’s too much you need to add on, just remember to cite all of your sources properly. Maybe you could also consider combining the conclusion part with the consequences part, and expand on that. I don’t see any grammar mistakes in your article, so keep up with the good work in your next draft! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Breezelily (talk • contribs) 22:17, 22 October 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Environmental Pollution and Activism in Mexico (January 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chetsford was:

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Chetsford (talk) 02:15, 28 January 2018 (UTC)