User talk:Brendanhoffsauce/sandbox

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Nice start. Don't forget to include inline citations (so readers can find your sources) and wikilinks (that allow readers to find out more about topics and terms they might not be familiar with). Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:35, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

A really good start ! Most of your sentences seem more like a research paper where you are adding some of your input, or phrasing. Whereas, on Wiki I think is supposed to be a matter of fact. Overall though nicely done! Labossofyou (talk) 21:52, 30 November 2014 (UTC)

I really enjoyed reading this article! Well written and a lot of factual information. The only adjustment I would make is pair the paragraphs into sections. For example, maybe have and early stages of the film section and then another sections for states that played the film and states that did not. Also be sure to add your sources at the bottom of the page. Other then that, great job! KevinHowe12 (talk) 15:38, 1 December 2014 (UTC)