User talk:Bretnavarro/Motel Beds (band)

I originally created this band page using a bio created by the band and have since rewritten it as a researched and biased article based on on relevant information. I have looked at the guidelines regarding band pages and have tried my best to adhere to those to get this page initially up and running so other contributors may add additional information to the page to reinforce the band's notability and relevance in the current scope of music representing the musical rich history of Dayton, OH which features several prominent Wiki approved acts that have been referred to within the article.

I appreciate your time in reviewing my first article and would appreciate any feedback to make my work better.

Thank you,

Bretnavarro (talk) 20:35, 12 July 2012 (UTC) Bret