User talk:BrettLance11/sandbox

Your potential edits look promising! Use this week to draft your edits and transfer them to the article page. Professorcravens (talk) 21:23, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Efstratios' Peer Review
Brett, Your edits were great. You really added great content which shows the true public opinion of gun control in the U.S. You were very clear in your additions and I can tell you really did some thorough research because of the enormous amount of statistics used. One thing I would like to see potentially added would be more context. Although adding polling information is incredibly useful, there could be more context given for the changes in public opinion of gun control between the years. I think your use of the Pew Research Center was great, and you distilled that information well. I just think using an academic journal article to give the article more context would make the article a little easier to digest rather than pouring over statistics. Your use of stats is not a bad thing, but adding statistics will give the article more veracity. I would suggest looking through your edits one more time for a grammar check to make sure your sentence structure is tightened up and you are using concise wording.