User talk:Bri.mendonsa/sandbox/Bri.mendonsa/Abbey Bible

Hi Bri, your article on the Abbey Bible is very thorough. You have very clear and concise information and your headings and subheadings carry the reader through the information in a way that covers all the bases. I found there to be a few places where I think you should edit for clarity. For example in your, in the second sentence of your lead you wrote, "It is an example of the Gothic style." I think its needs to be clear that it is an example of Illuminated Manuscript. And under your Current Location heading you say,"however it is currently not on view" might be better worded, it is currently not on display. I liked your article and found it very helpful to read, it helped me understand this whole process better.

I am having trouble uploading any images to my sandbox page. Bri.mendonsa (talk) 22:22, 7 April 2020 (UTC)