User talk:Brialexengli/sandbox

The Lead
Your lead is a good start. Here are some suggestions. 1. What is Colby? You should say something like, "The protagonist, Emaline, is a native of Colby, a small seaside town." 2. Spell out "eleventh." "Young adult" is lower-case.

Revise it and post it in the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 10:47, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
 * ok i edited it. Brialexengli (talk) 18:03, 26 February 2016 (UTC)