User talk:Brian Coughtrey

Help me!
I am hoping to add an article on Ralph Allen, a Canadian Artist... he is 93 years old. He does not seem to listed in the Wikipedia pages.

I have set up an account and loaded various links to support the page.

The issue is, I don't really know what I am doing.

Please let me know if I am doing something wrong. Please help me with...

Brian Coughtrey (talk) 20:26, 9 January 2019 (UTC) Brian Coughtrey
 * Note: This request has been asked and answered at the helpdesk. Eagleash (talk) 20:48, 9 January 2019 (UTC)

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Adding Ralph Allen to list of Canadian Artists and Canadian painters
I am not sure how to add someone to a semi-protected list? I would like to get Ralph Allen added to the Wikipedia list of Canadian Artists and Canadian Painters. The link below from the Canadian Government should suffice to verify his credentials. https://app.pch.gc.ca/application/aac-aic/artiste_detailler_bas-artist_detail_bas.app?rID=29473&fID=2&lang=en&qlang=fr&pID=865&ps=50&sort=AM_ASC

Or Perhaps the fact that he has works in the Canadian National Gallery: https://www.gallery.ca/collection/artist/ralph-allen

His full Bio can be found here, on the Canadian Art database http://ccca.concordia.ca/artists/artist_info.html?languagePref=en&link_id=1874&artist=Ralph+Allen

Brian Coughtrey

Comments
With regard to what you have said above, you shouldn't add him until the article is completed, not while it's a draft. By then you should be auto-confirmed and be able to add it yourself.

Your first four refs are OK, the last is not. Although you attribute it to the Whig-Standard it's actually linked to his own website and is in any case a self-quote, so not in any sense an independent third-party source. That page has links to the the original text, so if it was of value, it should be linked directly, eg to this page with full details of the source as it appears at the top of the pdf.

Much of your text is still unsourced, and needs proper references. You appear to be indulging in speculation and mind-reading quite a lot, for example, the unsourced claim The pressing commitments of professorship and raising a large family reduced his exhibiting in the 1970s.... Also ''became the starting point for a renaissance in Allen’s work....he had essentially begun again. Whilst landscape has always been an important feature of his work, in more recent years, Allen has been more interested in the human dimension''. Is presented as a fact, but again, it's actually him talking about himself, and of no value. What we want is facts to show why he meets our notability guidelines for creative professionals, not self-centred musing about himself Jimfbleak - talk to me?  06:55, 12 January 2019 (UTC)

Hi Folks, I am still looking for assistance developing a Page for Ralph Allen. I would like to get this one sorted out, before I try and develop more for other Faculty at Queen's University. Thanks in advance to anyone that can help.

Brian Coughtrey

Help request
I have replied to your request at User talk:Brian Coughtrey/sandbox. For future reference it is probably best to make help requests at your talk page (rather than the sandbox talk page) using the  template as you have done earlier on this page. It helps, also, if all advice etc. can be kept in one location if possible and please try to avoid asking the same question in either more than location or repetitively. Thank you. Happy editing. Eagleash (talk) 18:19, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I think you need to add  not   as it does not seem to have worked. Eagleash (talk) 19:32, 15 February 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ralph Allen (painter, born 1926) (May 27)
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MrClog (talk) 18:38, 27 May 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ralph Allen (painter, born 1926) (May 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Eagleash was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Ralph Allen (painter, born 1926), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Hi Eagleash, I have been chatting with mrclog... and he had made the appropriate edits. He had asked me to re-submit, so I assume the page is now complete?

Brian

Eagleash (talk) 12:44, 30 May 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ralph Allen (painter, born 1926) has been accepted
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