User talk:Brian Monroy/sandbox

Draft Review (Mohammed Koya)

 * I didn't see a rough draft, but I think it's interesting how you are researching something as local as Sacramento. For your article I would recommend attempting to be unbiased and providing lots of background details for audience that might not necessarily be from this area.
 * Maybe at one point in the document you could even roughly compare Sacramento's Environmental Organizations to national or even international organizations that exist.

Review - Inayah Les
I did not see a rough draft either, nor did I see an outline. However, I do applaud your efforts on writing an article about our local organizations considering the limited amount of information that exists for it. I recommend finding sufficent sources to support your claims and facts to meet the word limit. It would be interesting to see the comparison between Sacramento's enviornmental organization versus locations such as Flint, Michigan.

Peer Review Response
Hi Brian,

I believe you were assigned to peer review my article but never got around to it. If you have any tips or suggestions regarding my article, you can still add a review on my talk page.

Thanks

AlanNavai (talk) 06:43, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi Alan,

Ok.

You're welcome. Brian Monroy (talk) 19:54, 2 May 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brian Monroy (talk • contribs) 21:13, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Instructor Feedback
I'm glad that you are doing something local and this shows some research on your part. Here are a few suggestions to make sure you get a good grade on this: --Julianfulton (talk) 18:28, 22 April 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) follow the suggestions of your peer reviewers re: tone and content
 * 2) your "nonprofits" section doesn't seem to be about Sacramento region orgs. There are many more to be found.
 * 3) more description is needed on each organization, less linking to their websites.