User talk:Brian Waterbury

Welcome!
Hello, Brian Waterbury, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Comments on Bibliography
Brian: Your bibliography should be a list of references that you will use to write your section, not a list of references that you contributed to the spreadsheet (which is only six). Also, one of your citations was a duplicate and one was already on the article page. I have removed these. Njclum (talk) 02:09, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments on Outline
Brian: Your outline is intended to include specific facts that you intend to include in your draft.Njclum (talk) 02:44, 20 November 2016 (UTC)