User talk:BrianjCasciotta/sandbox

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I feel you should later on compare this game to previous Pokemon games and what sets it apart. Eid2298 (talk) 19:17, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

I like the description of the game you gave it really describes it to give non-experienced players a good idea of the game. I would like to see how it differs from other Pokemon games.Calkulated (talk) 03:16, 21 October 2016 (UTC)

I like how you tells about the background information about the game first and the description, but it will be better if you include why the game is attractive.Yochoy (talk) 16:54, 25 October 2016 (UTC)Yochoy

The entry was very descriptive of the pokemon game to non-players. I was really impressed that the game provided different features for players to use. I suggest you add the information of the about the problems or what the game lacks that other games had. It would be an improvement because it will describe the games goods and bads. I noticed the amount of description was given could be applicable to my own entry.Calkulated (talk) 01:38, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

reception section, first sentence needs citation. can you find a scholarly article from business source complete or hoovers about nintendo's reaction to the game Ctysick (talk) 15:49, 29 November 2016 (UTC)