User talk:Brianna Fleshman/Kiyoshi Shiga

Hi Brianna, First I would like to say great job on your article. I really enjoyed reading it. It had a very nice structure and tone to it and great content and sources. I really do not have a ton to say other than maybe check throughout your whole article to make sure all the claims are backed up by their respective resources. I would also say try and add a little more onto your lead, just to give your article a little more bulk.Cameronobr1 (talk) 02:16, 15 March 2021 (UTC)