User talk:Briannaanewton/Moken language

Final Review
Hi Brianna, this is my feedback for your final project. The 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:


 * 1) Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar, but I had to proof a few points (its vs it's, etc.). 4 points.
 * 2) Structure: The structure is logical and follows the suggested template. There is no lead paragraph. 4 points.
 * 3) Balance: At present, the article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
 * 4) Accuracy: It is hard to gauge the accuracy of the information as much information is presented without citations. The sources are generally of high quality. 4 points.
 * 5) Relevance: All of the information presented is relevant. 5 points.
 * 6) Length: Word count 509/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 2 points.

The final score is 24/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 19:44, 11 May 2021 (UTC)