User talk:BridgetHomer

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Hello, BridgetHomer, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Kayla's Peer Review
Hi Bridget!

I enjoyed reading your initial inputs for Anne Briardy Mergen. I know that you are not yet finished with a draft, so I only have a few minor notes.

As mentioned in the training module, every article should have a lead. Your lead could include some of the information that you reference in the "Work" header, including where Mergen worked, for how long, and what her official job title was.

Also, in terms of the "Work" section, I think that the paragraph could be broken up into a couple smaller paragraphs. For instance, when you start discussing where her cartoons are kept, a new paragraph could begin.

I think it is obvious that you need to cite more sources, but I'm sure that will come as you develop your draft. Otherwise, good job!

Hope this helps!

Kthurber424 (talk) 12:59, 11 November 2018 (UTC)