User talk:Bridgetclu/sandbox

Hey Bridget, I found your article your addition to the article extremely well researched and planned out. It is organized very well breaking it up into female and male as well as both together. I also found sound organization within the sections as well including the listing of subcultures and categories within a prison. I found your writing to be very objective and informative encompassing a wide range of views. I think you also filled in the gaps from the article well giving it a better structure then the article, which is lacking in areas.

The critiques I have you have manly already addressed. Most of what is written is stated facts that could be put into paragraph form with transitions. These facts could also be addressed more deeply and with more context. For example, the last section has very specific examples that could be implemented in the other sections. The in text citation are also needed, which you already know. I think the addition of a more specific category could also be beneficial. Eerisman (talk) 23:21, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

I think that you have a lot of great plans. Would you add these into one section? Or will you make other sections for each subsection? I think it looks great. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dakotahimmelman (talk • contribs) 00:34, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey Bridget! I'm so sorry I'm just reviewing your article - it looks so great though! I think you're very objective and fair, and it's clear that you know what you're talking about :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lbaumgartner928 (talk • contribs) 00:46, 5 November 2016 (UTC)