User talk:Brierbach/The Lost Lennon Tapes

Hello! Here is my Peer Review: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brierbach/The_Lost_Lennon_Tapes/Jonathan%20Kvech_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Jonathan Kvech (talk) 06:46, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

Feedback
Greetings. Great work on your article so far! When you started, this article was a short wp:stub and I think it's nearly qualified as a wp:start-class article, if it isn't already. You have received really helpful peer reviews from and  (link). I strongly advise you to carefully read their feedback and consider it as you get ready to publish your article. I'm going to highlight a few of their suggestions that seem particularly important.

suggested dividing the content up into sections and I think this is a great idea given how much longer the article is now. He also praised your writing style and I agree it's good. He also suggested being more specific about what kinds of songs and events are contained on the tapes.

suggested that an image would help the article a lot. I think that a picture of Lennon might not be the absolute best choice, a picture of the title screen or similar might be even better. For adding images, I advise you to inform yourself about Wikipedia's norms around images and copyright before you go looking for an image.

While you've already done a great job adding content. I think that the rich sources you've found could be mined for even more information. wp:mine is a how-to guide for extracting information from sources when crafting an article.

When you're done adding content to your article, I suggest you take a look at my page on polishing your article for ideas for your next round of work on this project. I especially think that doing things like adding wikilinks, "also see" links, categories, and external links are good things to do when polishing an article. I also suggest that you spend some time carefully copyediting the information you've already added to make it as easy to read as possible while maintaining an wp:encyclopedic tone.

Reach out to me when you think you're ready to publish your article by migrating your changes to the main namespace. Nice work!

Groceryheist (talk) 01:36, 5 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi ! I think I am getting close to my final draft of my article. I have incorporated feedback and added details from a few other sources I've collected. I am waiting for approval from one of my sources that all of the information is accurate and acceptable to share, but am ready for next steps and reviews when you have time. Thanks! Brierbach (talk) 08:59, 10 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Hey, great work on the article. I'm really impressed with how much you developed it.  I think the images you've added are great!  The only things that I'd like to suggest are to add some wp:see also and wp:external links to help interested readers explore further.  I don't think you'll need more feedback from me on that. Just go ahead and publish your article when you feel ready!  Awesome work! Groceryheist (talk) 22:49, 10 February 2021 (UTC)